【说教材】《梦游天姥吟留别》是部编版必修上册第三单元的一篇古诗词。这个单元以生命的诗意为主题,汇集了不同时期、不同体式的诗词名作。本诗的作者李白是浪漫主义诗人的代表,他以瑰丽的想象,在这首诗中为我们塑造了一个迷离的梦境。整首诗以七言为主,但不拘格律限制,行笔恣意洒脱,寄寓了自己深沉的身世之感【说学情】初中语文的古诗词教学侧重识记背诵,学生具备了一些文体知识,但还缺乏对古典诗歌进行系统性鉴赏的能力,进入高中阶段,需要指导学生在理解文本表层含义的基础上,深入解读诗歌、表达自己的见解。【说教学目标】根据语文学科素养的要求,我确立了这四个教学目标。语言方面,要能熟读内容,结合注释疏通文意,把握文中的关键字、词、句的含义。思维方面,缘景明情,在诵读过程中分析、感悟诗歌内容。审美鉴赏与创造方面,要能鉴赏梦游的意境,体会李白的浪漫主义诗风,提高鉴赏能力;文化方面,要能够品味诗人情感,感受其追求自由、不慕名利的高尚人格。
(二)朗读诗歌,整体感知好诗不厌百回读,熟读深思子自知。在整体感知阶段,综合利用自由朗读、齐读和示范朗读,让学生借助诵读走进诗歌。 设计意图:《普通高中语文课程标准》提出“在语文教育中,提倡诵读,因为这种方式是心、口、耳、目并用,感知的强度比单一感官的感受极大增强,语感的生成速度和品质都会提高。” 语文学科核心素养之“语言建构与运用”也要求采用语感与语理相互促进的办法来提高语言运用能力,而语感与语理的培养离不开“诵读”这一活动。多读几遍,不仅可使其义自见,也可使其意自明、其理自通、其气自涌。(三)鉴赏诗歌,重点突破在多样的朗读活动之后,我们不难发现,这一首现代诗,它在语意和诗意理解上并不像古典诗歌那样有着语言、历史及手法方面的障碍。但是,这并不代表现代诗就不值得仔细品味、认真咀嚼,经典的现代诗依然有着其浓浓的诗味和诗性。我将借助古典诗歌鉴赏方法来指导学生解读现代诗歌。我们先从学生最熟悉、赏析起来最容易的修辞手法入手,学生呈现了以下自主学习的成果。
(三)赏析课文,品味哲理此环节重在解决本课的重点难点。首先,我运用问答法解决1.2两个问题。问答可以吸引学生注意,激发学生思维,培养学生概括和说话能力。通过学生的回答,即“固一世之雄也,而今安在哉”和“哀吾生之须臾,羡长江之无穷”以及“挟飞仙以遨游,抱明月而长终”这三个句子,最后明确答案:古今历史对比生悲、人生短暂和自然无穷对比生悲、理想与现实矛盾生悲;再以同样的方式分析第4段,通过教师提出问题,学生进行思考和回答这一过程,归纳出“水与月”、“变与不变”和“自然之无尽藏也”这三层哲理,最后得出是苏轼超然洒脱、乐观旷达的人生观劝慰了客人,从而达到第5段中“客喜而笑”的结果。设计两个问题的意图是让学生得以把握苏轼由疑惑沮丧到豁然开朗这一情感变化,从而更好的赏析本文。
第二课时为知人。即利用预习所查到的资料、学生之间的分享以及教师预备的材料,合作探究三个问题:曹操为何如此渴望贤才?天下归心的愿望是否实现?如何评价曹操?本课时采用创设情境的方式,从刘备、曹丕、晚年曹操等多重角度评价曹操,自领角色,利用资料有逻辑地证明自己的观点。教师出示不同学者评价,师生共同研讨评价的技巧和原则,尝试写作短小文学评论。这是解决忧的果。第三课时为回味。创设诵读比赛的情境,在比赛和评价中研讨标点符号的作用,如何读出曹操诗歌独特的特点,以及带着对曹操的认识读出自己的理解。(每组评出最佳朗读者和最佳评论员,上传优秀视频)。这是为了让学生最后读出忧。第五,板书设计。以上是我本节课教学设计的板书,体现了分析本首诗的基本思路和学习方法。
(由于前一部分的铺垫,学生会比较容易地归纳出在矛盾中和对比映衬中刻画这两条,而在初中学过的《孔乙己》等小说中刻画方法也会使较多的学生联想到个性化的语言和动作是使人物栩栩如生重要方法这一条,所以学生自己就可以很快归纳出来。)作业:a.联系情节背诵第三、四段;b.写一篇读后感,谈谈你从“鸿门宴”故事得到的启示。六、说板书设计好的板书就像一份微型教案,我的板书力图全面而简明的将授课内容传递给学生,清晰直观,便于学生理解和记忆,理解文章主要内容。最上方两行分别横写标题“鸿门宴”和“司马迁”。板书重心是项羽、刘邦的人物分析:上半部分左边横写“项羽”,中间对应其主要性格“自矜功伐、为人不忍”,右边对应其形势的转化情况“主动”到“被动”;下半部分左边横写“刘邦”,中间对应其主要性格“能屈能伸、狡诈果断”,右边对应“被动”到“主动”,各自用线相连,上下形成鲜明对比。这个板书设计可以突出本文人物传记的特色和人物的鲜明性格及由此产生的形势逆转,是为教学重点的突出服务的。
三、说学法(一)学情分析经过初中阶段对文言文的学习,学生初步了解一些文言实词的意见、常见虚词的用法以及词性活用、古今异义、通假字等文言现象。但多靠机械记忆,忽略在文章内容及句义章法的理解把握前提下记忆。且较少对点滴的文言知识进行归纳整理。(二)学法指导1、圈点评注法学习课文时用一些简单醒目的符号,在字、词、句、段上勾画,标记疑问,评注阅读时的感受、体会。形成自己的圈点勾画的符号系统,使用符号时不应随意变动,以便重读复习文章。2、通过“粗读”“通读”“品读”“齐读”“个别范读”等多种形式的朗读,指导学生整体把握文章内容及思路。在此前提下,设计迁移阅读,引导学生触类旁通,学以致用,达到以读促说,以读促写。四、说教学程序(第一课时)
8、板书装在套子里的人别里科夫的形象——有形的套子套己——无形的套子套人第二课时合作探究:目标挖掘主题及现实意义。问题设置,衔接上节课内容,层层深入。1、结合上节课别里科夫的形象分析:他的思想被什么套住,其悲剧原因在哪?(根据人物形象的分析与社会背景的了解,直击主题。)沙皇腐朽的专制统治套住了他的思想,沙皇的清规戒律使他不敢越雷池一步,所以他是受害者,但他的身份性格以及特定的社会环境,又让他成为沙皇统治的捍卫者。2、他恋爱的情节以及科瓦连科这两个人物的塑造的意义?(从人物以及主题入手,推翻沙皇的腐朽反动的统治,必须是每一个人都敢于打破套子,唤醒革新,更新观念,拒绝腐朽。)别里科夫渴望打破束缚,也想革新,而科瓦连科两个人物体现朝气活泼,以及勇于打破常规束缚的勇气,为革新升起了一片曙光。3、塑造别里科夫的手法,除了一般刻画人物方法外,还有什么方法?
(六)说教学策略1.专题性海量的媒介信息必须加以选择或者整合,以项目为依据,进行信息筛选,形成专题性阅读与交流;培养学生对文本信息“化零为整”的能力,提升跨媒介阅读与交流学习的充实感。2.情境化情境教学应指向学生的应用,建构富有符合时代气息的内容,与生活经验更加贴合,对学生的语言建构与运用有所提升,在情境中能够有效地进行交流。3.任务化以任务为导向的序列化学习,可以为学生构建学习路线图、学习框架等具体任务引导;或以跨媒介的认识与应用为任务的设置引导;甚至以阅读和交流作为序列化安排的实践引导。4.整合性跨媒介阅读与交流是结合线上线下的资源,形成新的“超媒介”,也能实现对信息进行“深加工”,多种媒介的信息整合只为一个核心教学内容服务。5.互文性语言文字是语文之生命,我们是立足于语言文字的探讨,音乐、图像、视频等文本与传统语言文字文本形成互文,触发学生对学习内容立体化和具体化的感悟,提升学生的审美能力。
一、抓住特点说教材《小英雄雨来(节选)》部编版小学语文四年级下册第六单元的讲读课文,课文节选自作家管桦写的同名中篇小说,讲的是抗日战争时期,晋察冀边区的少年雨来,聪明勇敢,游泳本领高强,为了掩护革命干部,机智地同敌人作斗争的故事。我在解读本文时特别关注了三点:一是故事情节跌宕起伏,将一位热爱祖国、不畏强敌的少年英雄塑造的活灵活现。二是文章中有些语句含义比较深刻,三是课文分六部分,每部分用空行隔开,便于训练学生的归纳概括能力。教学目标:1.自主学习字词,会认“晋、扭”等17个生字,会写“晋、炕”等15个生字,理解字义,识记字形。2.体会雨来的英雄品质,激发爱国情感。3.品味课文如何进行环境描写,体会这样描写的好处。
【说教材】这篇课文节选自作家管桦写的同名中篇小说,选入课文时有改动,讲的是在那战火连天、枪炮轰鸣的抗日战争时期,晋察冀边区的少年雨来,聪明勇敢,游泳本领高强,为了掩护革命干部,机智地同敌人作斗争的故事,本文围绕这一主题,课文分六个部分叙述。【说目标】1.自学生字新词,掌握读音,理解词义;(课前完成)2.用比较快的速度默读课文,练习给每部分加上小标题3.理解课文内容,体会雨来与敌人英勇、顽强、机智地作斗争的英雄品质。
【交流点拨】 首联:点题。“青山”指北固山。诗人在船上,想象船到镇江后,还要乘驿车到别处,暗含旅途奔波之意。 颔联:写船上所见景色。“平”“阔”“正”“悬”四字用得好:“潮平”,两岸才显得宽阔;“风正”,帆才有悬空的态势。“潮平”句,又是为颈联中“江春”句作铺垫。 颈联:既写景又点明了时令。“残夜”指夜将尽而未尽之际。残夜而东方海日已升,旧年而江上已是春天——时间过得这么快,怎能不令人感慨! 尾联:诗人离家日久,日复一日,年复一年,新年来到,正是家人团聚之时,而自己旅途他乡,久不得归,见到此景,情何以堪?由此他自然想到要借大雁来给他传递家书了。全诗陈陈相因,浑然一体。
我认为这首诗,一共三节,每节句数、字数相当,结构工整,符合建筑美的特点,同时也使诗歌具有了节奏感;另外这首诗音韵和谐,朗朗上口。我认为这首诗相同句式回环往复,给人留下深刻印象。我认为此诗语言犹如清水出芙蓉,清丽淡雅,营造了唯美纯净的世界。…………师:节奏把握这一技巧相对比较简单,大家的创作和点评都很有水准,很好。希望大家在以后课余的诗歌创作中能兼顾到我们现在所谈的技巧。【设计意图】讲诗歌的创作技巧,既要讲出最关键的技巧,也要结合实例,让讲解深入浅出,让学生在理解的同时加以训练,使学生能够加深对知识点的理解。三、课内演练,巩固技法 学习本节课的技法之后,请大家写一首诗或一个诗歌片段,要求运用本节课所讲的诗歌写作技巧。(学生思考创作并展示)
例如《你是山间的清泉》《你是天空的雄鹰》《你是三春晖》《你是燃烧的红烛》等。先想好歌颂的对象,再展开联想、想象,结合事物的特点,融入自己的情感。如要写“母亲”,想想由母亲的特质可以联想到什么具体形象,如从母亲的勤劳想到老黄牛,从母亲对孩子无私的爱和付出联想到阳光、雨露、蜡烛等。 范文引路:五、课后巩固,布置作业(福建漳州)题目:守护 (将题目补充完整,然后作文)要求:(1)文体不限,字数不少于600字(诗歌不少于30行)。(2)不得出现真实人名、校名。(3)字迹工整,卷面整洁。 写作点拨:预设:本题是半命题作文题,题目“守护”是一个动词后面可以跟宾主,如“快乐”“向往”“妈妈”“歌声”等,或抽象或具体,都可以,还可以拟题“守护者”等。“守护”分为几个层面:谁守护?守护什么?怎样守护?守护结果如何?如此等等。可以抓住其中一个层面,写叙事诗、抒情诗、论辩色彩浓郁的诗等。从题目要求看,诗歌不少于30行,这么长的诗歌适合分为几个,通过几个片段、镜头、故事、感想等来表现主题。
一. 教材分析1. 本单元的中心话题是“计算机(Computers)”,内容涉及计算机的发展历史,计算机的应用等。本节课是该单元的第一课时,我将Warming up, Pre-reading and Comprehending这四部分整合为一节精读课。其中。Reading部分是题为WHO AM I?的文章,以第一人称的拟人手法介绍了计算机发长演变的历史和计算机在各个领域的应用,其主旨是表达计算机的发展变化之快以及在生活中用途之广。而Warming up部分以图片的形式展现了计算机的发展历程;Pre-reading中的问题和排序分别是为了预测语篇的内容和测试学生对计算机历史了解的情况;Comprehending则通过各项练习训练学生的阅读技能,从而加深对文章的理解。可见这几部分是一个有机的整体。2. 教学目标:1) 语言目标:重点词汇及短语:abacus, calculate, calculator, PC, laptop, PDA, robot, analytical, technological, universal, mathematical, artificial, intelligent, network, explore, in common, as a result.重点句子:a. My real father was Alan Turing, who in 1963 wrote a book to describe how computers could be made to work, and build a “universal machine” to solve any mathematical problem.
Then I would ask them to think of a funny English or Chinese and tell it to partners. While telling stories, they can use expressions and some acting to help make the story funny. 5 minutes would be given to do this.Those stories they told there will be the material for their writing. Soletting them tell it at first is helpful. And they can make a difference between telling a funny story and writing it down. Generally speaking, it is difficult forstudents to write well because they don’t know what to write and how to write. Asking them to tell their own stories at first can help them come up with what to write.After their telling, I would invite someone to share his/her story with all of us and I would write it down on the blackboard.This example story would be used as a sample to illustrate the format of funny story. Different from a story from teacher or textbook, a story from students can obviously become a interesting material to draw students’ attention.Then I would ask the whole class to put this story into several parts. It might be a little bit difficult for them. So I would ask them to find out whether all the sentences are necessary. After delete some sentences, there are 6 sentences left behind. Then they can easily put them into three parts. After interaction with students, I would teach them the right terms for each part and conclude the format of funny story.This step is the key and difficult point in my lesson. So I mainly usetask-based teaching method in this part and the task for students was divided into several stages. With the separated difficult level, students can find there are usually three parts in writing. They can also learn to write without the unnecessary parts in the process of analyzing. And then I wouldn’t rush to tell them the right terms to them directly. Instead, I would ask them to name them by their own. A confused mind is better for acquiring knowledge.While-writing:Then I would give students 7 minutes to write down this story, without other requirements.With all the preparations in pre-writing, students’ difficulties were cleared. So it would be much easier for them to write down the story within 7 minutes. There are no other requirements because students’ first writing is actually a drafting. It would be revise and edit several times later. Writing, as a skill
Language learning needs a context, which can help the learners to understand the language and then can product comprehensible output, so computer has the advantages to make the materials attractive.Part 3 Learning MethodsTask-based, self-dependent and cooperative learningPart 4 Teaching ProcedureStep One Lead-in“Interest is the best teacher.” Therefore, at the very beginning of the class, I should spark the students’ mind to focus on the centre topic “the band”. I’ll show some pictures of food to attract their attention and then bring some questions.Question:What kind of food they like?What should go into a good meal?The answers must relate to the diet. After this, the students will be eager to know something about a balance diet and this is the very time to naturally lead the class into Step 2Step 2 Reading for information: skimming and scanning In this step, I use Task-based Language Teaching method, which can give students a clear and specific purpose while skimming and scanning the context.Task 1 General ideaThe students will be asked to just glance at the title and the pictures of the passage, and then guess what they will read in the text. And they’ll be divided into groups of four to have a discussion.The purpose is to inspire the students to read actively, not passively. In addition, the task is to develop the students’ reading skill by making prediction and to encourage the students to express their thoughts in English and cooperate with each other.Task 2 Main idea of each paragraphCooperative learning can raise the students’ interest and create an atmosphere of achievement. Based on this theory, I divide the whole class into 4 groups to skim the whole text and get the main idea of each paragraph.
Good afternoon, everyone. It’s my great pleasure to be here sharing my lesson with you. The content of my lesson is Senior English for China Book5 Unit 3 Life in the Future. I’ll be ready to begin this lesson from six parts: Analysis of the teaching material, Analysis of the students, Teaching aims and important and difficult points, Teaching methods and aids, Teaching procedures, and Blackboard design. First, let me talk about the teaching material.Part 1 Analysis of the Teaching Material:This unit is about what human beings’ life will be like in about one thousand years. By studying of this unit, we’ll Enable the students to know the changes in humans’ life and some new inventions bringing about the change and develop the interest in science. This lesson plays an important part in the English teaching in this unit. This is an important lesson in Book Five. From this lesson, it starts asking the Ss to grasp contents of each passage. Therefore, this lesson is in the important position of the teaching material. If the Ss can learn it well, it will be helpful to make the Ss learn the rest of this unit.Part 2 Analysis of the SsAs Senior2 Ss, they are at different levels of English fluency, some of them have lost interest in English. So during the lesson, I arrange a variety of activities to let all of them join in to attract their interest and let them be confident and taste the joy of success.
【教材分析】The topic of this unit is about teenage life, which belongs to the theme context of “humans and oneself”.As teenagers who shoulder the responsibility of “Chinese great dream”, they must fully know themselves, including their strengths, weaknesses and challenges etc. They are supposed to improve themselves continuously and readily study their subjects, and thus foster their strategies and confidence in lifelong studies.This period is entitled the freshmen challenges, which mainly concerns some big challenges for new students in Senior high school. In this period, a teacher should lead students to find out what their challenges are and guide them to figure out how to crack the challenges and better themselves. More importantly, a teacher should instruct students to absorb new language points and appreciate the language. Besides, a teacher must instruct students to acquire some skills concerning reading efficiently and inspire them to talk more about their new school life, especially their new problems and solutions both at school and in life.【教学目标与核心素养】1. Enable students to acquire the basic usage of the new words and expressions concerning the freshmen challenges and learn to use them flexibly.2. Enable students to have a good understanding of the freshmen challenges in the new senior high school which is quite different from junior middle school.3. Develop students’ sense of cooperative learning and individual thinking capability. 4. Develop students’ different learning skills to solve different reading comprehensive problems.
Then have them write a short paragraph to describe and explain their changes. After that, get the Ss to exchange their drafts with their partners and use the checklist to give feedback on their drafts, and finally revise it.Step 5 Summary of how to write a wellness book1.健康书的审题步骤:第一步:明确要求该写作属于经验分享,故要用第一人称来写;时态以一股现在时为主。第二步:确定段落该类文章可以从以下三个方面人手:Para.1首先表明写作的目的Para.2自己的做法及心得体会Para.3表示期望及感谢第三步:提炼要点2.健康书常见句式:1) It is an honor for me to share my favorite sport with you,2) It makes me feel relaxed playing with my friends.3) It makes me rid myself of stress while playing with my friends.4) Moreover, it provides me a valuable chance to communicate with others.5) I we eat too little or too much, or if we choose the wrong food, we may become sick.6) We can do something to change the poor situation.Step 6Homework假如你的老师让你在班级Wellness Bok上分享自己的亲身经历及心得,请根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的文章1. 你喜欢的运动是什么?2. 你最喜欢的原因是什么?3. 你参加锻炼的体会。
5. Read to get detailed information about Paragraph 5.Q1. What shows the revival of Tangshan?Q2. How can Tangshan revive itself and get up on its feet again?Q3. In times of disasters, how can we go through it?T: In times of disasters, we should unify, show the wisdom and stay positive.Step 4 Activity 4 Highlighting the theme and reflecting1. Make a summary of the text.2. Further understand the titleQ: After our learning, why do you think the earth didn’t sleep on that night?T: An earthquake happened. The people in the earthquake suffered a lot, and the people outside Tangshan were concerned about the people there a lot.3. Reflect through discussion on what can be learnt after reading.T: Disasters are powerful. Unpreparedness can be deadly. Life is weak, but if people work together to help each other, disasters can be defeated.There is no love from disaster, but we have love in the human heart.Step 5 Assignment How does the writer convey that the earthquake was deadly, and that people were helpless during the earthquake? Try to find some attractive and impressive expressions and note them down.