五、布置作业新闻是我们了解社会、了解世界的窗口,每天都有各种各样的新闻发生。虽然新闻写作活动已经结束,但是听新闻、看新闻的活动才刚刚启幕。学了新闻写作的方法,我们再去听新闻、看新闻,就更有针对性,更能了解作者的写作意图。今天的作业比较特殊,是一个长期的作业,即希望同学们能够每天坚持至少听新闻、看新闻十分钟。结束语:同学们,明代思想家顾宪成有名联:“风声雨声读书声声声入耳;家事国事天下事事事关心。”“新闻每天发生,视角各有不同。”网络时代,我们更应该走向更广阔的世界,用一双新闻眼,发现生活中的新闻事件,传播正能量的新闻事实。这是我们的义务,也是我们光荣的责任。【设计意图】写作新闻是提升综合素质的绝佳途径之一,它让我们紧贴时代脉搏,既开阔了视野,又锻炼了思辨能力,还可以学到各种科学新知、流行文化。在学生了解了新闻写作的基本方法后,向他们提出听新闻、看新闻的要求,旨在培养他们关心时事的习惯,为他们的素养提升奠基。
预设 这篇邀请函格式正确、要素齐全、语言得体。主要表现在:标题直接点明邀请的目的,清晰醒目;格式上有称呼、问候语、祝颂语、落款,符合邀请函的基本格式要求;正文中有邀请的理由,让家长明确被邀请的原因;有活动的时间、地点,以及启动仪式的流程和注意事项,让被邀请者有所了解和准备,更显真诚、有礼。整个邀请函,态度诚恳,简洁明了,表达得体。3.拓展迁移,把握书信体应用文写作格式师:请同学们探讨一下,采用书信格式写作的应用文还有哪些?它们的共同点是什么?预设 感谢信、慰问信、表扬信、申请书(请假条)、倡议书、介绍信、证明信、求职信、应聘信、祝贺信、请柬等。格式一般由六个部分构成,即标题、称呼、问候语、正文、祝颂语、落款。
广场为开放式,从四面都可进入,但在东北和西南各有一个木制长廊,上面缠络着紫藤萝,每到夜晚,这里点亮一盏盏小彩灯,与紫藤萝相辉映,煞是好看。广场正北对着的是公园管理处,共2层。南面是万福园芙蓉广场富强店,面积有4000多平方米,是一个超大型的商场。这就是我们的芙蓉广场,怎么样,很漂亮吧,有空来玩玩吧!生点评:何秀同学写芙蓉广场采用“总—分—总”的结构,开篇先点明广场的位置、特征,然后介绍得名原因、广场的规模地势,再按照游踪介绍,最后总结。全文采用多种说明方法,且融入情感,既让读者了解了芙蓉广场的有关知识,又表达了自己的喜爱之情。师点评:文章介绍群体建筑——广场,抓住芙蓉广场秀美、雅致的特点,重点介绍第一层主题广场,略写周边草坪及建筑,详略得当,层次分明。另外,作品采用“总—分—总”的结构,以游览的方式引导读者了解广场建筑,让文章生动亲切,也是作品的亮点。
我认为这首诗,一共三节,每节句数、字数相当,结构工整,符合建筑美的特点,同时也使诗歌具有了节奏感;另外这首诗音韵和谐,朗朗上口。我认为这首诗相同句式回环往复,给人留下深刻印象。我认为此诗语言犹如清水出芙蓉,清丽淡雅,营造了唯美纯净的世界。…………师:节奏把握这一技巧相对比较简单,大家的创作和点评都很有水准,很好。希望大家在以后课余的诗歌创作中能兼顾到我们现在所谈的技巧。【设计意图】讲诗歌的创作技巧,既要讲出最关键的技巧,也要结合实例,让讲解深入浅出,让学生在理解的同时加以训练,使学生能够加深对知识点的理解。三、课内演练,巩固技法 学习本节课的技法之后,请大家写一首诗或一个诗歌片段,要求运用本节课所讲的诗歌写作技巧。(学生思考创作并展示)
例如《你是山间的清泉》《你是天空的雄鹰》《你是三春晖》《你是燃烧的红烛》等。先想好歌颂的对象,再展开联想、想象,结合事物的特点,融入自己的情感。如要写“母亲”,想想由母亲的特质可以联想到什么具体形象,如从母亲的勤劳想到老黄牛,从母亲对孩子无私的爱和付出联想到阳光、雨露、蜡烛等。 范文引路:五、课后巩固,布置作业(福建漳州)题目:守护 (将题目补充完整,然后作文)要求:(1)文体不限,字数不少于600字(诗歌不少于30行)。(2)不得出现真实人名、校名。(3)字迹工整,卷面整洁。 写作点拨:预设:本题是半命题作文题,题目“守护”是一个动词后面可以跟宾主,如“快乐”“向往”“妈妈”“歌声”等,或抽象或具体,都可以,还可以拟题“守护者”等。“守护”分为几个层面:谁守护?守护什么?怎样守护?守护结果如何?如此等等。可以抓住其中一个层面,写叙事诗、抒情诗、论辩色彩浓郁的诗等。从题目要求看,诗歌不少于30行,这么长的诗歌适合分为几个,通过几个片段、镜头、故事、感想等来表现主题。
生4:电子游戏还有世界大赛。——世界电子游戏大赛为电子游戏“正名”,倡导国人转变“视电子竞技为洪水猛兽”的心态,而将其作为考验手脑并用能力的一项体育赛事项目。提炼观点:青少年对电子游戏的喜爱可转移到为国争光的竞技项目上。…………2.文题拟定同学们拟定的作文题目可分为两类:一类是能直接看出作者观点的作文题目:如电子游戏危害青少年成长;沉迷电子游戏危害多……另一类是不能直接看出作者观点的作文题目:如电子游戏之我见;我看电子游戏……总的来说,大家直接亮明观点的作文题目都是写电子游戏的危害的。没有直接亮明作者观点的作文题目是既写玩电子游戏的好处也写玩电子游戏的坏处的。其实,很多事物并不是非黑即白的,我们可以把对电子游戏的认识写得更全面、深刻些,让人能从中明白新的道理。
当然,知足常乐者,并不是说这个人要安于现状,没有追求,没有理想,而是要懂得适可而止,懂得取舍,懂得放弃,毕竟人的欲望是无限的。如《我的叔叔于勒》讲述了这样一个故事:年轻时,于勒大肆挥霍,被看成是“祸水”,落得被扫地出门的地步。既至美洲,赚了小钱,两年后又发了大财,成为大家的“福星”。菲利普一家渴盼有钱的于勒归来,二姐也因此找到了未婚夫,一家人都很高兴,出国到哲尔赛岛旅行。他们在船上却见到一个酷似于勒的穷苦的卖牡蛎的人,菲利普先生在船长那里得到了可怕的印证。不但发财的梦想化为乌有,进入上流社会的美梦成为泡影,而且眼下二女儿的婚事也岌岌可危,最后全家不动声色地改乘另一艘海轮回来。菲利普夫妇对于勒的态度完全建立在金钱之上,因此,他们的人生注定不会常乐。被称为“古今隐逸诗人之宗”的陶渊明,在乡野山林中,找到了人生乐趣。大名鼎鼎的诗仙李白,在不得志之时,仍有“天生我材必有用,千金散尽还复来”的达观之句。被林语堂先生称为“无可救药的乐天派”的苏东坡虽一生坎坷,仍对生命和生活充满热爱。所以,知足者,常乐也。人们常说:“人生不如意事十之八九。”那么我们不妨“常想一二”。拥有一颗乐观的心,才是我们成功的关键。
分析是联系论据与论点的桥梁,是丰富文章内容的关键所在。有了分析,事例和论点就能成为有机的统一体;只有通过理性的分析,剖析出事例与论点之间的关系,才能让文章拥有令人信服的逻辑力量。总结:运用论据的时候,对论据进行适当的变化、概括、分析,要有重点、有意识地突出所述事实论据和观点一致的地方,保证所述事实与观点相对应。可参照“分论点+事例+对事例进行分析+结论(照应分论点)”这样的格式来进行论证。【设计意图】以学生小组讨论来得出运用论据的三个方法 ,让学生自己在交流讨论中品味体验。通过“讨论”“交流”等形式实现学生的自主学习,达到培养学生独立思考能力和写作表达能力的目的。五、品读例文,评点“言之有据”1.根据文题,画思维导图课件出示:《论语·为政》中说:“人而无信,不知其可也。”诚信,自古以来就是一种美德。欺诈、造假等不讲诚信的现象历来为人们所深恶痛绝。请以《谈诚信》为题,尝试画一个议论文的思维导图。
水的性质水是液体。石块和木块有一定的形状,无论放在桌子上或者盒子里,它们都不会改变自己的形状,都是固体。水就不同,放在圆杯子里就成为圆形,放在方盒子里就成了方形,它没有一定的形状。水是无色透明的。有人说水是白色的,这话错了。拿水同牛奶比较一下就会明白,牛奶才是白色的,水是什么颜色也没有的。如果把一根筷子插入牛奶里,我们就看不见它。而把一根筷子插入清水中,我们能够透过清水看见插入的筷子。水是无嗅、无味的。怎样来区分无色透明的烧酒和水呢?光凭肉眼是毫无办法的。只要闻一闻,尝一尝就能正确无误地区分了。烧酒有酒的气味和味道,而水却什么气味、什么味道也没有。因此,在正常的情况下,水是无色、无嗅、无味的液体。
一要始终秉持教学第一位的本位意识。思政教育、专业教育、x教育、知行教育、实践教育、工程教育,这些所有的模块构成了我们学校人才培养体系,大家要始终秉持教学本位的理念,深刻研判国家、社会、学校人才培养的新形势和新要求,不断探索前沿高等教育先进的教学理念和教学方法,持续推进我校教育体系的完善与创新。二要加强团队协作。x教育建设并非闭门造车,我们在新工科新文科协同发展理念引导下,大力扶持文理渗透、理工交融的学科交叉融合,整合校内多学科资源,建立开放、共享、交叉、融合的x教育课程体系,这已成为我们学校x教育建设导向,所以更需要大家加强团队协作,体现产教融合科教融汇、有组织科研有组织教研的一些集中成果。三要认真践行课堂革命教学改革。x教育是人才培养的主战场之一,也是教学改革的重要突破口。希望我们的老师从x教育改革出发,又反哺回专业教育、工程教育。
2重点难点教学重点第一课时:了解绘画故事的表现特点,感受真、善、美。第二课时:绘画自编故事的创作特点及步骤。教学难点第一课时:选材、构思设计。第二课时:构图与绘制3教学过程3.1 第一课时教学活动活动1【导入】“连连看” 教师提供数张图片和几句话(或几段文字),请学生根据文字找到相应的图画将它们连起来,并找出先后顺序将故事讲完整。教师小结,出示课题《图文并茂》。设计意图:以游戏的形式“连一连”,激发学生的好奇心和兴趣,以饱满的热情投入学习内容——图文并茂。
2学情分析这是一个学生比较感兴趣的内容,通过学习不仅能提高学生的学习欲望,更希望能根据一句话或者一段话以画画的形式表现出来。3重点难点重点:了解绘画故事的表现特点,感受真、善、美。绘画自编故事的创作特点及步骤。难点:选材、构思设计、构图与绘制。
Step 3 Analyzing article structureActivity 31. Teachers raise questions to guide students to analyze the chapter structure of this diary and think about how to describe the festival experience. (1)What should be included in the opening/body/closing paragraph(s)?(2)How did the writer arrange his/her ideas?(3)What kind of interesting details did the writer describe?(4)How did the writer describe his/her feelings/emotions during the event?2. Students read and compare the three sentence patterns in activity 2. Try to rewrite the first paragraph of the diary with these three sentence patterns. After that, students exchange corrections with their partners. Such as:●This was my first time spending three days experiencing the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience. ●I'll never forget my experience at the Naadam Festival because it was my first time to watch the exciting Mongolian games of horse racing, wrestling, and archery so closely. ●I'll always remember my first experience at the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was so amazing to spend three days witnessing a grand Mongolian ceremony. Step 4 Accumulation of statementsActivity 41. Ask the students to read the diary again. Look for sentences that express feelings and emotions, especially those with the -ing form and the past participle. Such as:● …horse racing, wrestling, and archery, which are all so exciting to watch. ● some amazing performances● I was surprised to see…● I was a little worried about. . . ● feeling really tiredOther emotional statements:●I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part. ●I'm finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. ●He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and cat hot pot. I can’t wait!2. In addition to the use of the -ing form and the past participle, the teacher should guide the students in the appreciation of these statements, ask them to memorize them, and encourage them to use them reasonably in writing practice.
1. 表示时间。Hearing these stories, I’m skeptical about the place. = When I heard these stories. . . 2. 表示原因。Not knowing his address, I can’t send this book to him. = Because/Since/As I don’t know his address. . . 3. 表示结果。His father died, leaving him a lot of money. =. . . and left him a lot of money4. 表示条件。Going straight down the road, you will find the department store. = If you go straight down the road. . . 5. 表示让步。Being tired, they went on working. =Although they were tired. . . 6. 表示行为方式、伴随情况或补充说明。He lay on the grass, staring at the sky for a long time. =. . . and stared at the sky for a long time注意:非谓语动词作状语时, 如所提供的动词不能和句子中的主语保持一致, 动词-ing形式必须有自己的逻辑主语, 通常由名词或代词来担任, 这就是独立主格结构。The last bus having gone, we had to walk home. (having gone的逻辑主语是the last bus, 而不是we)Weather permitting, the football match will be played on Friday. (permitting的逻辑主语是time, 而不是the football match)Step 7 Practice1. ________(study) hard, you are sure to get first prize. 2. People use plastic in their daily life, _______(leave) large amounts of waste. 3. ________(work) hard at your lessons, you are to succeed. 4. The old man, ____________(work) abroad for twenty years, is on the way back to his motherland. 5. ______________(finish) his homework, he was playing on the playground. Answers: 1. Studying 2. leaving 3. Working 4.having worked 5. Having finishedStep 8 HomeworkFinish the homework on Page 22.
Example:One day, a poor boy who was trying to pay his way through school by sending newspapers door to door found that he only had one dime(一角)left. He was so hungry that he decided to beg for a meal at the next house.However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. Instead of a meal he asked for a drink of water. She thought he looked hungry so she brought him a large glass of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?” “You don’t owe me anything,” she replied, “Mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” “Then I thank you from the bottom of my heart.” With these words, Howard Kelly left that house.Years later the woman became badly ill and was finally sent to the hospital in a big city. Dr. Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Dressed in his doctor’s clothes, Dr. Kelly went into her room and recognized her at once. From that day on, he gave special attention to her, and decided to do his best to save her life.At last the woman was saved. Dr. Kelly asked the business office to pass the final bill to him. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side. The bill was sent to the woman’s room. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay for it off. Finally she looked, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention. She read these words: “Paid in full with a glass of milk, Dr. Howard Kelly.” Tear of joy flooded her eyes.
The topic of this part is “Describe a place with distinctive cultural identity”.This section focuses on Chinese culture by introducing Chinatown, whose purpose is to show the relationship between the Chinese culture and American culture. The Chinese culture in Chinatown is an important part of American culture. Chinatown is an important window of spreading Chinese culture and the spirit homeland of oversea Chinese, where foreigners can experience Chinese culture by themselves.Concretely, the title is “Welcome to Chinatown!”, from which we can know that the article aims at introducing Chinatown. The author used the “Introduction--Body Paragraph--Conclusion” to describe the people, language, architecture, business, famous food and drinks and people’s activities, which can be a centre for Chinese culture and shows its unique charm.1. Read quickly to get main idea; read carefully to get the detailed information.2. Learn the characteristics of writing and language.3. Learn to introduce your own town according to the text.4. Learn to correct others’ writing.1. Learn the characteristics of writing and language.2. Learn to introduce your own town according to the text.Step 1 Lead in ---Small talkIn the reading part, we mentioned the Chinatown of San Francisco. How much do you know about Chinatown of San Francisco ?Chinatown is a main living place for Chinese immigrants, where you can see many Chinese-style buildings, costumes, operas, restaurants, music and even hear Chinese.Step 2 Before reading ---Predict the contentWhat is the writer’s purpose of writing this text ? How do you know ?From the title(Welcome to Chinatown) and some key words from the text(tourist, visit, visitors, experience), we can know the purpose of the text is to introduce Chinatown and show the relationship between Chinese culture and American culture.
Q4: What is the function of the International exploration ?Having astronauts from different countries on boardQ5: What can you learn from Para 4 ?China has made great achievements in exploring spaceQ6: What is the attitude to the space exploration ?SupportiveStep 6 Post reading---RetellPeople have always wanted to learn more about space. Before the mid-20th century, most people felt (1)_________ (travel) into space was an impossible dream. However, (2)____ the help of scientists, peoplesucceeded in realizing their dream (3) _________ (explore) space. On 4 October 1957, the Sputnik 1 satellite (4) ____________(launch) by the USSR. (5) ________________ scientists try to make sure nothing goes wrong, accidents can still happen. These disasters made everyone(6)___________(disappoint), but people still believe in the importance of (7) ________(carry) on space exploration. In 2003, China became the third country to (8)_____________ (independent) send humans into space. Then Shenzhou 6 and 7 completed (9)____ second manned orbit and the first Chinese spacewalk. In spite of the difficulties, scientists hope future (10)__________ (discovery) will not only enable us to understand the universe but also help us survive well into the future.Answers: 1. travelling 2. with 3. to explore 4. was launched 5. Although6. disappointed 7. carrying 8. independently 9. a 10. discoveriesStep 6 Post reading---Critical thinkingQ1: What do you think of the space exploration ? I think it is beneficial to us. Through further study of space, people will make full use of it in the future, such as the space experiments by Wang Yaping in Tian Gong 1.Q2: If you are determined to be an astronaut, what should you prepare at present ?First of all, I should study hard to get a related college degree. Besides, I must keep mental and physical healthy.Step 7. HomeworkTry to summarize the structure of the article by a mind map.
Step 4: Listen again and decide if the following statements are true (T) or false (F).1 It was the first time Chen Liyan's story was reported. T口 F口2 Chen found 10,000 yuan in a small plastic bag in Taiyuan railway station口 F口3 Wang Zheng apologized to Chen because he couldn't offer her more money. T口 F口4 Chen took out a large loan to cure her daughter, T口 F口5 Wang set up a fundraising website for Chen's daughter after Chen told him about her situation. T口 F口Step 5:After listening, discuss the questions.1 What kind of person do you think Chen Liyan is?Chen Liyan is generous and honest because she returned a large sum of money to the owner.2 Did Chen return the money because she didn't need it?No. She returned the money because it was the right thing to do. Evidence for this is that she refused to accept the reward money because she felt that it had not been earned. 3 Is it common for people to do what Chen did?It depends on the culture. In some countries it is quite common to return money that has been found. In other countries, people believe "Finders are keepers!" 4 How did Wang Zheng feel about the return of his money?He must have been very happy and relieved to have gotten his money back. We know this because he thanked Chen repeatedly and even offered her a reward.5 Why did Ma Dongbao tell Wang about Chen's family?He must have had great sympathy for Chen and her daughter and wanted to help them.'We know this because he arranged help for them. 6 How did the news reporter feel about Chen's actions?The news reporter felt that it showed that money wasn't the most important thing in life. We know this because the reporter told us that this is what Chen believes. and then said, “that's a great attitude to take."
? Could you offer me some kind of work here?? I don’t want your charity, I just want an honest job.? Careless: I landed in Britain by accident.Step 7:Consolidation.? Find Henry? Roderick and Oliver were I .making a bet when they saw Henry, a poor young man. ? Know Henry? About a month ago, Henry was sailing and later he found himself carried out to sea by a strong wind. Fortunately, he 2.was spotted by a ship. And it was the ship that brought him to 3.England? Offer money to Henry ? Oliver and Roderick gave Henry a letter and told him that there was money in it. They 4.persuaded him to accept it, and made him 5.promise that it wouldn't be opened until 2 o'clock.Step 8:Language pointsa large amount of: a large quantity of; a great deal ofe.g. They bought a large amount of furniture before they moved their new house.make a bet: make an arrangement to risk money, etc. on an event of which the result is doubtful.e.g. We made a bet on the result of the match.permit sb to do something: allow somebody to do somethinge.g. My mother doesn’t permit me to ride in the street after it rained.by accident: as a result of chancee.g. I only found it by accident.stare at: look at somebody or something with the eyes wide open in a fixed gaze( in astonishment, wonder, fear, etc)to be honest: to tell you the truth; to be franke.g. To be honest, I don’t think we have a chance of winning.Step7 Homework:What do you think will happen to Henry? Will the bank-note help him or get him into trouble?
The grammar of this unit is designed to review noun clauses. Sentences that use nouns in a sentence are called noun clauses. Nominal clauses can act as subject, object, predicate, appositive and other components in compound sentences. According to the above-mentioned different grammatical functions, nominal clauses are divided into subject clause, object clause, predicate clause and appositive clause. In this unit, we will review the three kinds of nominal clauses. Appositive clauses are not required to be mastered in the optional compulsory stage, so they are not involved.1. Guide the students to judge the compound sentences and determine the composition of the clauses in the sentence.2. Instruct students to try to learn grammar by generalizing grammar rules, controlling written practice, and semi-open oral output.3. Inspire the students to systematize the function and usage of noun clause1.Instruct students to try to learn grammar by generalizing grammar rules, controlling written practice, and semi-open oral output.2.Inspire the students to systematize the function and usage of noun clauseStep1: The teacher ask studetns to find out more nominal clauses from the reading passage and udnerline the nominal clauses.